Sunday, February 17, 2008

Assignment 3 - Love Story

Boy, there are a ton of things that need to be uploaded simultaneously for this one...

First off, heres the script I have kinda worked out so far, that will act as a narrative...

I used to know a woman by the park

She'd sit there. Staring into the leaves, into space. Everyday at noon.

She would go there with her lunch box.

And everyday, she'd pull out a sandwich. Then another.

She would eat one. And leave one behind.

"Hi"

She turned slowly and smiled. A radiant smile like no other.

"I've often seen you here. Do you stay around the area?"

She gingerly nodded her head.

"May I?"

She nodded again. And I sat next to her.

There really wasn't much to say.

"Why do you leave a sandwich behind?"

"Why do you ask?"

"I don't know, just thought it a little odd..."

"Don't ask. Everything in its own time."

I nodded.

(At this point I need to think of a way to connect the story to the womans narrative, any ideas?)

"See the leaves? How slowly they fall to the ground. Its like our lives, we are born and we slowly fall too."

"Each leaf is affected by the wind, big or small. Sometimes you fall fast, sometimes you fall slow. But you still fall."

"Each leaf no matter how pretty, no matter how intricate will need to take that free fall one day."

"Each leaf will eventually hit the ground."

I nodded again.

"Its like us isn't it? We complain so much about life and what it brings. Some of us really do have a hard time. Some of us sail by. Some dance with the wind. Do we really see where its all headed?"

"The ground," I answered.

"Yes, the ground. And back into the earth, where we were conceived. Why worry about everything, we don't get to keep our possessions, we will all turn to dust one day.

"True," I said with great clarity.

She told me that nature taught her a great deal about life. And that it helped her through the hardships she faced.

That was a long time ago. I still remember.

We met often like this. Talking about life.

I began to find her a solace. She straightened my thoughts.

She once told me, that she liked the rising and setting of the sun. It reminded her that there are things that should be done in your prime, while it is bright.

Was she trying to tell me something?

I thought it was perfect. She loved to talk, and I loved to listen.

But it was also so wrong. She, like a sage and I like a fool.

She could carry the burden of the world. I could only stand by and watch.

I could never tell her.

She moved on.

To another part of town perhaps.

Hopefully far away.

The last time I saw her, she didn't say anything.

The next day, there was only a sandwich on the bench. Rotted by the sun.


Next, this is a link to the music that I intend to use...

http://homepage.mac.com/cushy1/MEDITATION/files/Meditation.mp3

Note that I have already emailed the author of this music and have his permission to use it :)



What follows next is a series of sample photographs that kind of demonstrate the colour style I want to use for the video...


I want to take a note though that these photos are not exactly as I took them I made some colour adjustments. For most of these photos I upped the brightness and compressed the levels a little, which led to an increased vibrancy. Also, the greens have been increased ABIT as well, to help achieve this overexposed/green effect that I intend to do for the other photos.


Combined with the music, I hope the piece becomes a relaxing piece, not something that grips people on the edge of their seat... or should I try something edgier?

This rose, just for your info, its fake and made of plastic. But its very red. Haha...


Macro shots of blades of grass, not as contrasting as I would like but I guess I could take more shots...

I know the sky is overexposed here, but I want that white light effect, I have shots of the same place but with blue skies though, however, the leaves in that one turned out less green.


This was actually taken on a rainy day, from the view from my house, theres a slight vingette effect because of the extremely close black bars that were out of focus, but it didnt hurt the photo so I just left it as such...

This tree, was taken from an abandoned plot of land, just playing with the focus... oh and if you notice, the intended browns for the assignment arent as vibrant as the greens.


AND OF COURSE:

a 30sec sample video...I probably would have to speed things up or simplify the narrative for the final but this was just a test run, was alot harder than I thought, and ended up messing with photoshop masks, transparency blah blah blah...(P.S. I have no idea why the mask looks weird here, it looks completely fine in youtube itself...)

11 comments:

Anonymous said...

Wow, your concept seems abstract. But i like it! Gives me a surreal feeling.

Some comments on the photos u've posted. The pictures seemed a bit too luminous? At least on my screen it looks luminous and hurting on the eyes. Mabye try making the colour more warm? Or is there a reason for the pictures being a bit luminous?

The music seems good to me. I don't suggest using an edgier music as this may not go with the storyline?

Pei said...

Woah. I think it's great! It's sweet. The pictures are great! You have paced the tune and rhythm of the whole thing well. Can't wait to see the whole video!

As for the narrative part. I think there is no need for a link. You can just continue.

P.S: What camera did you use? I only have the normal camera and I wanted to achieve that kind of effect but it's impossible. Like the micro take ones. Any tips?

Anonymous said...

Hi,

i like your concept and the layout of your video. Its very classy and professional looking. I agree though that if the colours were warmer it might look nicer, but i thought the music fitted really well too.

chr1s0ng said...

Ok. Picture wise, maybe a little over-exposed.... maybe that's the effect you wanted, but i can't really be sure. might need to tweak the brightness / contrast maybe.

Script looks detailed for sure (extremely well thought i'd say... just how you'll exactly portray all that might be a bit of a challenge, but i think you've more or less got it all together.

aline_hs said...

hi,

nice photography... it really has the focus of the story that you want to convey...

after viewing the first 30secs of the video.. it has a lonely feel of the plot...

Anonymous said...

Mark, I like the video and the narration. I especially liked how you kept “she’d sit there” part while the other phrases were shown. It’s very clever and interesting. I feel that the music suited the whole idea of the video. I ALSO WANT TO SPEAK TO THE AUTHOR! Are there going to be any actors in the video? The 30 second clip was good. Keep it up.

Calm the mayhem within me said...

Nice colours used, but would the story include any characters inside? Or it is more of a narration/poem type?

Anonymous said...

hi there,

I think your video is good. Very simple... Especially the "staring into space" bit, just the black background (VOID).

Maybe you could take pictures of leaves slowly falling and touching the ground? But then again, it is ery literal. haha

Joon Yong said...

hi mark,
great vid, and photos.

anyway, regarding the actors part. i think u can explore leaving the actors out? might give it more of a dreamy, abstract effect (if that's what u are looking for).

Anonymous said...

Hi Mark

I think your pictures are very well-taken and the video is professionally done too. Are you using any actors/actresses in the final video? I feel that the overall effect will be better if you include actors/actresses. Under the “she’d sit there” narration, perhaps you could add an image of the girl staring to the right (at your pictures). Looking forward to watching the final version of your video.

Anonymous said...

Hello Mark:

Was trying to find your comment box and realized you had 2 entries together! So here goes:

For the narrative about changing from you to the woman, you can change the colour of the text to maybe red or pink. Another way is that when the guy narrates, words comes from the left and when the girl narrates, words can come out from the right. When you are consistent, the viewers will be able to understand the story immediately.

I really like the trailer you did!